Saturday, March 6, 2010

Imitating other poets

The assignment asked that the class write work "in the style of" particular poets. Here are the results. In the style of Kirk Robertson


Under the Bridge:

cold and lifeless

dead white and red

sleeping in another world

eternally

and when I saw him

he smiled

he was happy


...Baxter Boeh-Sobon



Denise Levertov Style

Sitting on the couch, she observes
her roommates scuttle about,
always coming, always going.
Still, she remains.

She tries to fill her days
to make it seem like
she is ok,
so they won't notice.

Won't notice the sadness in her eyes
the way she jumps at any chance
to talk, any form
of interaction.

But they know;
know that she regrets,
know that she is scared,
know that she is stuck.

Stuck sitting on the couch
with her roommates scuttling about,
They come, they go.
And she stays.


Laurence Ferlinghetti style.

Always putting on a show
He wears many masks,
has different personalities.
And I don't know
which one is real.

Most people only see once mask.
But me, I'm special.
I was lucky enough to be his daughter.
And I always wondered
which one is real.

To some he is kind.
A peaceful scholar
here to share his knowledge.
His thoughts on life seem amazing
and sincere.

To others he is unmemorable.
Just a passerby with no emotion.
Seemingly floating through life.

I see the scholar in public.
When he has an image to uphold.
The passerby comes out in transit
and then as we reach a "safe" place
all hell brakes loose.

The masks fall off, and I see the real man.
The one he hides from everyone but me.
Because I am special.

The angry man tromps through the house,
picking apart everything he sees.
He lets his rage take over
and the scholar uses his wisdom and words
to destroy every piece of his family.

And then, the man of many masks
will go on to choose yet another mask.
....Holly Spier

Denise Lavertov Style

Sitting on the couch, she observes
her roommates scuttle about,
always coming, always going.
Still, she remains.

She tries to fill her days
to make it seem like
she is ok,
so they won't notice.

Won't notice the sadness in her eyes
the way she jumps at any chance
to talk, any form
of interaction.

But they know;
know that she regrets,
know that she is scared,
know that she is stuck.

Stuck sitting on the couch
with her roommates scuttling about,
They come, they go.
And she stays.


Laurence Ferlinghetti style.

Always putting on a show
He wears many masks,
has different personalities.
And I don't know
which one is real.

Most people only see once mask.
But me, I'm special.
I was lucky enough to be his daughter.
And I always wondered
which one is real.

To some he is kind.
A peaceful scholar
here to share his knowledge.
His thoughts on life seem amazing
and sincere.

To others he is unmemorable.
Just a passerby with no emotion.
Seemingly floating through life.

I see the scholar in public.
When he has an image to uphold.
The passerby comes out in transit
and then as we reach a "safe" place
all hell brakes loose.

The masks fall off, and I see the real man.
The one he hides from everyone but me.
Because I am special.

The angry man tromps through the house,
picking apart everything he sees.
He lets his rage take over
and the scholar uses his wisdom and words
to destroy every piece of his family.

And then, the man of many masks
will go on to choose yet another man

Inspired by Robert Creeley

The Morning

Waking in the sheets

warm but fresh

your arm around me

from behind


Lying awake with eyes closed

are you not sleeping

simply breathing heavily

and thinking

as I am?


We lay here, content

enjoying the pale sunshine of the morning

but seeing the imminent darkness

seeping into it


But we stay

in the sheets

pretending the end will not come

come to ruin our morning

Inspired by Marianne Moore


Running

You are not alone in your contempt for the motion

The force on the joints, feels as if they’re grinding at

first

But after time the motion feels more natural

The exhalation begins to match the steps of feet

The inhalation begins to match the exhalation


The force on the joints becomes less rigid

The path becomes more circular

Unwinding circles of my thoughts, stretching

For miles, never doubling back


Unwinding like the smoke of my breath in the cold

Daybreak, end

from the motionless night to the freedom

Of the grass and road, freedom in the form of muscles relaxing

Sweat forming in droplets, one running down the back of my neck

Trying to catch up to me


Lungs expanding, I won’t let it catch me

Begging my supports not to fail me, to execute without pain

Concentrating only on the sounds in my ears, my own breathing,

My own steps

Until I reach the turn and the sounds of the world are upon me again

There is no end

No end, just time to turn back

...Catherine Broderick

KATHERINE ANDERSON
Here is my d.a. levy poem

Wake up to a buzzing sound, the lights are on outside

Sounds like the lights when their on in this place

Sounds like lights that are old and broken

Lights that light apathy that is old

And worn,

The old have worn, have many rags

While the young, well the young

Are here. Apathetic. Mainstream America.

Can’t you see? It’s not the where it’s the how you

Got where. On apath is how you got where

And… no you can’t run on it, it won’t get you anywhere fast

You’ll get nowhere fast.

Give me the answer, well we really don’t know--

Can’t tell you, could you please stop asking

Who said you knew the answer anyway?

For heaven’s sake! can’t we just let it be?

The answer will make you money,

Give me the answer.

Money is fake. What you feel is real

Time is made by man, like fake leather shoes

It’ll make you’re feet sweat.

So, why worry about the time, why worry about hydrogen or

This water we breathe?

Someone wants to know,

How we got here.

Here is my Ann Menebroker, I actually did 2 of them

(1)

I knew he would call in February.

I knew when she was coming.

4 months of silence, but I knew what was coming.

Driving down the five, half asleep, exhausted

In the cold, clear, crisp sunshine that looks

Nothing like the day I met him.

Everything gets darker until

Khole is the color of the world.

The day, we should have known,

Summer doesn’t last

It only lives in photographs and

Flashbulb memories.

That single photograph,

Where do I look when

The picture becomes out of focus?

(2)

The rain on the umbrella

Splish-drip-Splashing, drumming

Sounds like the noises we used to make

With our hands, as we sat in dark and sang,

as waves crashed upon the rocky beach below;

To linger just a little longer

here with you.

Here

With

you

With

me

The echoes splash and ripple in the mind.

--Katie



John Giorno-style Poem


What do we

call the

memory stains

of a day

wafting between

night and day

I say they're

black toxins

or black

poisons

I say they

will not

choke the

dreams out of

my head

lingering

lingering

like a

disease

permanently

sprawled on a

living room

couch as

an unwanted

houseguest

that rises

and rises

and rises

only to

drag its

its

sooty feet

through

my head



Douglas Blazek-style Poem


Your love is not holy

it is greed crying like an insolent child

for a second, a third helping, splitting its stomach

while scraping the inside of yours


Your love is not holy

it is domination collaring a docile beast

needlessly chaining devotion to its neck

like an iron noose


Your love is not holy

it is sex sanitized by the grace of gods

reeling passions choked of realism

in the stained sheets of a priest's bed


Is any love holy?

When it is all cowardice grasping a cliff's edge

fearing the gamble of actions and

of being swallowed by the ground


...Kelley Paugh



I Was Told

They tell me that I have your eyes, your laugh, even your walk.

They tell me that you used to love mango juice boxes, too.

They show me pictures of you and picture of me and are delighted when I lie and say that I can’t see the difference.

Then why is it that whenever you come to visit, I hide under my bed?

If we are essentially the same person like they tell me we are, why do I have to hide with the dust that was swept away for your arrival?

Why do I have to watch you step through the doorway from my perch on the stairs?

Why do you let me wait for you on the stairs?

Why can’t you greet me with the same quiet hug that you give to everyone else?

You would think, seeing that I am your only child, you would give me more than a glance as you entered my house. You come in all your glory, banners flying, gifts spilling from your American suitcases, tilting my fragile balance.

You get everyone’s immediate respect and approval, and while you’re here I am no one. I have to work to live up to the legacy you leave behind. Star student, exemplary child, gone off to seek his fortune in the land of opportunity. Who am I to fill your place?

Why do you interfere with everything I do? You’re not even here, but your presence remains long after you board the plane. I can’t even smile, can’t walk across the room, can’t even enjoy my favorite drink without a comment on how alike we are.

When you are here, I watch you.

Watch for some similarity, a glimpse of what is so clear to everyone else.

But I see nothing.

You are everything everyone hopes for, and there is none of me in there.

Mom tells me that I should be proud.

I have a father who was able to get out of the same cycle that everyone in small towns is doomed to repeat. I have a father who is going to make something for himself and for his family. I have a father who is bold and daring, braving the harshness of America for me. But all I see is a foreigner.

I don’t know you.

All I know are the men that have raised me. The hardworking men who had the time to be there when I took my first steps, said my first word, walked me to my first day of school. The men who helped me to learn the alphabet and the men who are always available. The men that I see at the temple. The men who know when my birthday is.

And you are not those men.

You are the advertisement on the new color TV. Pale and clean shaven, selling something that people don’t need but will buy because you tell them what they want to hear. You are a small window on the airplanes that I watch fly by.

I don’t know you.

All I know is me.


...Mandeep Chahal



Anne Waldman Imitation

Awake in the giant day

Is where I am

There is glass where my eyes,

Dull and glossed over, struggle to see.

An hour of immense possibility flies by

And I do nothing but sit in the present

Which keeps changing moment to moment

How can I tell you my heart is a stone?

It is a melancholy story you won’t believe

And a gray sky

Where something is always doing in a room

Especially in winter

Staying under blankets!

By March the sun in lingering and the land is green.

Birds grow loud

The drainage ditch is full

Squirrels lift their heads to say hello

Soon it is good to be sneezing

By then the gardens are overflowing

With dogwood, rebud, hickory, red and white oaks,

Hazelnut bushes, violets, jacks-in-the-pulpit,

Skunk cabbages, pawpaws and May apples

Whose names depress you because you must know them.

There are frogs and crickets too – but I go on too long.

Like the animal, I must stop by the water’s edge

To have a drink and think things over.

*

That was good. The drink I mean

I feel refreshed and ready for anything

Though I’m not in Vermont or Kentucky unfortunately

But in San Francisco, the foggiest place in the world.

And it’s December

Here someone is always losing, including me

Though I tend to lose like a spoiled child

Throwing the game pieces on the

Floor! Look out

If you aren’t paying attention you’ll be sorry

And hurt too.

*

This season’s cruelty hurts me

And others, I’m sure, who’d rather be elsewhere but can’t

Because of their jobs, families, friends, money

It’s rough anyway you look at it

But what can you do?

It’s worse elsewhere, I’m sure

Take Iraq

No thanks

I think about Iraq a lot, however

And wonder if I’ll ever “see” it

The way I’ve seen Asia, I mean

Those stylish Chinese girls!

They all wear IPODs.

In Taiwan you travel by moped or subway

The MTR and the MRT register like the names in connection with them:

Shenzhen, Kowloon, Tsim Sha Tsui

What does it all mean?

I never ask that, being foreign

In this apartment in which I dwell these thoughts pass by

I hope you won’t mind the mess when you do too



William Carpenter Imitation:

I think of private school kids

How easy it is for them.

They have bottomless pockets

They drive BMWs and live anywhere

They drift from vacation home to vacation home

On streets with collegiate sounding names

And there is money in the vacation homes

That wants to be spent freely

For on the east coast there is no guilt nor shame

Nor hunger, life is as a dream,

Fish jump into boats to be caught,

They shoot deer and salt them in their mountain vacation homes.

There are season on the east coast.

You follow the seasons, you drift between

Fall, winter, summer, and spring

To follow the rules of nature.

If you want June or October or some cross-country skiing,

You fly to that vacation hotspot

And the season is there always.

It is good climate for gossip, since it is full

Of people. You pluck them from the streets at random

Or search specifically in one of the defined neighborhoods.

It is good also for religion, as old churches

Still stand from pilgrim days,

Structured and rigid, no emotions,

Creeds that make sinful your underground desires,

Your daily habits and the parts of your body.

In California we wander aimlessly day to day,

Pick fruit off neighbor’s trees,

Have no religion at all, spill over borders,

Wear swimsuits, skip work, have sex

And gossip, as we do, on the way to the next party.

I spent some time in the Midwest, where they

Were neither wholly free nor wholly tragic.

They lived, screwed, married, divorced and died

Like regular folk. They grew corn and fed it to

Their pigs, then shipped them east and west

For slaughter. It made sense.

When I am finished with this beach-ridden state,

Lack of seasons or weather,

I will become a farmer’s wife outside Madison,

Rise early and drive out to the barn

To feed the chickens.

I will have friends and keep

Them close, with no gossip, for gossip,

California or Maine, drives you crazy.


...Amy Martin














Wallace Steven’s Style

The clever young goddess graces the Earth, the motherland of design,
A woman teetering under the weight of a womb cradling creation’s blooming mind,
Fashioning an imagination to stuff light into captivity, into cages wish for changes.

But he won’t fit in that easy, wrestling these clanging chains of hurricanes
That leave welts on his bursting thoughts of beauty and evil and lonely lover’s pains
As if Lord Aeolus could even attempt to tame these insane fuming flames.

They reek of righteous anger, raging and smoldering the walls
That so flawlessly imprisoned the stories and fantasies that could evoke worlds –
Yet the soul crackled red, the mind’s eye rolling in the mad frenzy of it all.

King Aeolus fights off the crazed desires of his prisoner, his flaming fire
“To live in this haven is a blessing” he soothed the younglings burning cries
As if an establishment of conformity in young minds could ever retire.

But his calling kept on calling, and he was replying
Ready to set the world ablaze, scorch the earth that bound him
Until the banshee screeches of a sizzling reality echoed around him.


let man begin again




Robert Service’s Style

One believed a trust had been established –
One plus one would make three.
But faith loses its identity when ambushed,
Rage steals the crown of honor and runs free.

He tired of her tried pathetic lies,
Of a truce they could never agree on.
Blood boiled at her dominating and demeaning sighs
That squeezed his pride, a mere petty black pawn.

With each push, shove, abuse, and pointed blame
He could feel his growing anger burst at the seams.
Of all the emotions felt, he could easily say with no shame
That love and remorse were never a part of them.

So he hardened his chest and sharpened his sword,
Ready to battle this evil on his victimized shores.
But the gnawing something in the back of his mind leaned towards
The irony of this relationship as a metaphor for war.


...SADHNA SAMANTARAL

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