Tuesday, February 23, 2010

Kevin Labarbera response to drawing story.

Kevin Labarbera

Picnic Day

“What’s the plan boss?” Jim asked. All eyes were focused on their brave leader. His eyes, black marbles that spun across the room as if looking for some kind of answer. No one had seen what he had seen; the widespread massacre of his people within seconds. He rubbed his hands together to repress his nervousness.

“This is going to be dangerous,” he thought silently. He composed himself and started aloud, “I have brought you here for one reason and one reason only: survival. The task at hand is not for the weak-minded or the faint of heart. I suggest for those who are hesitant to leave now. You will only become a liability to yourself and others on the battlefield. As we march from the crevices of our darkened home towards the light of danger, may I remind you that the outcome of this campaign will be based solely on teamwork. If we do not work together, we shall be squished alone!”

His men dressed in black uniform gave a rallying cry like no other. Passion was seeping out of every one of them. Their leader motioned for the movement and the attack began. One by one and two by two, they headed towards the peak of their mountainous home and peered across the valley. The light was blinding, but their eyes were able to adjust within seconds. This team was not only trained for this type of operation, but they were the best at it. Their legs were like cable wires, being able to move in any way they pleased. Their senses were amplified to the maximum degree.

As the troop got closer and closer to their target, the thought of failure crept into everyone’s mind. There was no evidence that danger was approaching, but these men felt it deep within their thorax. Suddenly, their eminent commander gave the halt signal and the air became quieter than within the midst of sound sleep. Everyone was waiting, waiting for something that would let them know what to do. Finally, the motion was given and the men scampered across the valley to accomplish their goal as soon as possible. “Battalion 2! Take the ‘Lays.’ I want every one of you on a chip. Battalion 4! Take every grape you can find! If it still lives in slavery, use everything in your power to yank its rounded juiciness from the roots that confine it. Leave the red planet! I don’t want anyone dying at the hands of those disgusting earthworms. Our enemies are large, so make as much effort to accomplish the task as quickly as possible.”

He watched as his men risked their lives for the betterment of the hill. He knew some of his men would not make it, but that was a risk he was willing to take. As the battle was coming to a close, enemies from all over the land came to feast. This had happened before and it will happen again. He charged out to battle with a cry that no one could hear. Historians later document his words as, “Viva Picnic Day!”

Catherine Broderick story-response to drawing

Catherine Brokerick


Riding the lightning bolt down to earth, Jim marveled at the strange land before him. These strange two eyed people flew their cloths on strings and distorted their faces to show their chewing instruments and insides. They had a strange sort of fur atop their heads instead of an antenna and they covered their bodies with cloths similar to the ones they flew in the air. Jim’s people removed the earth’s livestock and nobody seemed to care, they just continued to stare at their flying clothes in ignorant amazement. “Are these beings so oblivious,” thought Jim, “that they know not of our plan to command their planet? Can they not see that we are overtaking them?” As a ship in the sky began to beam up an earth cow, the rays distorted its figure into one with wings and a single horn on its head, much like the single eye placed in the middle of Jim’s face. Being lifted into the air by electronic, not physical, means frightened the cow and milk began sputtering into the mouth of an earth being lying below it, eyes closed and bearing its teeth as it flew its cloth contraption. The cow squealed in fear as it was beamed closer and closer to the ship, but the earth being continued to smile broadly, allowing the cow’s delicious milk to trickle into his mouth. Jim was still riding the lightning bolt down to earth as this occurred and he thought, “Does this earth being not care for his livestock? Does he blissfully ignore the creature’s calls for help, only taking what the cow provides him and ignoring his frightened screams? It must be this way with all earth beings, they must take from their earth and its creatures, giving nothing in return and offering no assistance. ” This thought puzzled Jim because on his planet any livestock that were used where used wholly, no part was wasted and the creatures were treated with respect and gratitude for their service in furthering the strength of the people. Jim took further notice in the cow with the dripping milk and saw that it was not only squealing out of fear from being lifted off of the ground but also from its collar that was still attached to the spoke in the ground. The higher the cow was lifted the tighter the collar became and the more furiously the cow tried to squeal to the human below, enjoying its milk but ignoring the source. Eventually the squealing stopped, the cow produced no more milk, and the spoke was ripped out of the ground, putting the cow out of his misery. The blissful kite flyer below felt around his mouth with his tongue, confused at the absence of milk. “Where has the milk gone? Why am I denied my rightful joy?” Thought the earth being. Becoming angry and confused he started on a rampage, carrying his kite over to another earth being. “Where has my milk gone?” Cried the first earth being. The second earth being replied he did not know. The first earth creature thrust his kite into the hands of the second and pushed him into the line of lightning that Jim was riding to earth upon. The lightning shocked the earth creature and rendered him lifeless. As it was Jim’s lightning bolt that killed this second earth being, he saw the whole scene. Jim decided he did not want to conquer this planet anymore.


STORIES GENERATED BY DRAWINGS FROM DESIGN 14 STUDENTS

EVAN LOKER

I still have the desire to chase these life-affirming actions, to smell the twisted poppies, within the lifeboat of my dreams.

Six long months ago; hours bend and refract through the single frosted window pane, they constrict my neck like a home-made noose. That was the first six months (but what are months? Whose operations of time do I serve?), after which I felt the singular empowerment of having nothing left to lose, of the pats on my back that sustained a spineless fear—surviving this blunt (but obscure) fear of death by sheer neglect within this washed-up, sterile infirmary! But I am here yet—do you wish to congratulate me?

Obviously, the romance, like bitch’s crystal adrenaline spikes is fleeting and forgettable. Now it is listlessnesssssssssssssss. Tempered with latent, droning anxiety of an imminent avalanche (these sterile white walls hang so precariously!) that may consume my vulnerable heart… Endless cycle of fear, of exposure—then gratitude for the feeling of my own warm breath, for still living and existing—washes into sullenness, isolation—now back into that comfortable fear.

I am no more a person, a Volk, then a mobilized, medicalized evil; an ivy Medusa fucking the civilized world into oblivion! These attacks are venomous, of Scythian archers dressed in flowing blank cloaks, or the rags of my paltry progenitors, aimed at my undeveloped breasts—“deviant”, “degenerate”, “monster-terrorist-faggot” are the fissures that penetrate and dangle ridiculously from the hind of my pierced fleshed…I am no longer mobile, no longer noble.

But they cannot sanitize this greater kingdom. And when the rains come in Seattle, the Great Floods fall for a time without end. In the evening when the fluorescent fixtures flicking and flirt with darkness, I feel the foundation of this ignoble tower tremble majestically, vacillating like the fox-tails in the sea.

Waters, like star-struck adolescents, trickle in to greet their wounded hero; the procession grows until the pressure is too much for that pale school boy of a window, it shatters down the center a vomits the remaining legion of dewy cobalt thread… deeper and higher, the sounds swirl in the most simply-enchanting melody— the room like a broken cargo hull and, I, the remaining ballast. As I embrace this divine embrace, most surely the numb breast of death, I am liberated of anxiety, an angel floats out of its prostrate body; I fall into ecstatic paralysis, so damn close to the waking world, yet so dramatically opposed, so chaotically strung together, as plastic baubles festooned by human hair. Before my eyes, beneath by body my bed stretches above the occupied water (with its own agenda)—the army cot re-animates, grows then decays into the deck of worn-out clipper. The white linoleum cell blocks melt, rather dissolve, within the magic liquid—I am no longer trapped, I am before the sea again.

I can only tell of the images that slide in an order without continuity or concern; this world, my kingdom, operates in another way, one with sense but no method. The day is light again, the journey from darkness, the temporary deliverance makes me breath, shallow, exultant breaths; I am walking, upright and with as much latitutde as the humble boat will allow. I’m standing at the wheel, the gears that control this engine, as the sails whip and howl overhead, I veer us towards the coast. The landscape, the seascape is dappled with xxxxxxxxxxx’s—signals of my desires, each crossing line is a song of my victory! I chase them but cannot catch them, but the pursuit fills my life with elusive significance. They snow down like flakes, then are suspended like idle dragon flies; they are ribbons in my hair.

Across the horizon, the colossal X with its square-rigged mast, sails my way. I do not know if it is the marker of my fullest desire, a tightly-wrapped gift that I cannot comprehend, or perhaps an inimical cross, the very crux of life, a triangulation of suffering and non-existence; it sails on. It is bridesmaided by seven decaying first-mates, angry or excited, brandishing their weapons, using the blades to sharpen the tips of their empty hands. I want to take them in, to learn my fate through the experience, to gamble on my life by the risk of the x, at the risk of my ephemeral dream.

I move the wheel, but I cannot grip—my hand is taken, only a comical hook protrudes stupidly in a confused loop. It is burdensome. The other hand, perhaps taken by some other disease or some other doctor, is sewn, with disheveled, amateurish grace, decorated by the same xxxxxxxxxxxx’s that fills my vision.The days are long, one still has not passed. The birds circle. The sky is now empty. The map is a child’s scrawling. It was yanked from a naked refrigerator.

I don’t move anymore. I feel like a scarecrow. I feel a wall flower on my elbow. I am confined again.

Sunday, February 21, 2010

a Blazon by Aleksandr Sakhanyuk

Aleksandr's Blazon was quite extensive. I decided to give it its own page.

The first, the last, and the human.

Your form,

Arcane in its potency,

Designed by Terra.

Skin the color of rich soil

Molded in its bed of shore-earth

By the chaste tides of the Tigris

And as the river of Eden washed over it

An ancient sculpture formed

Of river clay

A body from before our kind had shame

Or beauty

Only dreams.

Your hair,

Shadows in a twilight forest

Softer than ether

Strands of a void

From a sinful Underworld

Your eyes a galaxy

Your gaze a reborn star

Their white a vast expanse of light

Spiraling towards a frightening, wondrous dark.

Strange worlds, stubbornly blemishing that white,

Earths and anchors for those frightened of the lustrous black.

Your lips,

Fresh silk

Your teeth,

Ancient and forgotten pearls

Untouched by our opinions

Confident in neither beauty

Nor worth

But in themselves

Your smile,

A diamond’s glimmer

Cruel fantasies and blinding ecstasies

Concealed in the glint

Of a new age’s shimmering monument

Of future promises

Of past experiences

Of modern reality

Your breath,

A rare and priceless spice

Your neck,

A lacquer vase

Honey skin over graceful sinew

A calm strength, a passionate weakness

A perfect vessel

Which waters song

And speech

And laughter

Your voice,

The scream of an eagle

The roar of a lion

The call of a siren

The hiss of a basilisk

The bubbling of streams

The sorcery of druids

The whisper of winds

The shifting of sand

The rustle of leaves

The groan of trees

The laughter of fire

The drone of mountains

The orchestra of a million men

The choir of a world of fey

Your collarbone,

A steppe

Your shoulder,

The pride of a panther

Jungle’s grace

An Amazonian god’s power

Your arm,

A deadly serpent

Its gentle caress

Betraying none

Of the magnificent force

Your hand,

A desert spider

Weaving through pain and pleasure

Spinning webs and words of ink

A reassuring brush against your friend

A venomous dagger against your enemy

Your touch,

The warmth of a summer rain

The rasp of a fall leaf

The glide of a frozen stream in winter

The pulse of a flowering field in spring

Your side,

Cascading amber

The bronzed torso of a Roman statue

Fluid and firm

Your leg,

A marble column

Haughty model

For the architects of Antiquity

Your walk,

The dance of tumbleweed

Free and tall

An Atlas between heaven and earth

With the sun in your hair

The sky in your eyes

And the ground beneath your feet

Your scent,

A myrrh salve

Heated cinnamon

A last meal’s bread

An exotic oil

Heady in its flavor

Bittersweet in its taste

Flowing from your skin

Like a temptation

Your embrace,

The euphoria of rest

The burn of sacrificial fire

The thunderous overload of sense

An instant

Bursting into a universe

When you are mine,

I am the greatest god

The smallest ant.

Blazon exercise-a list poem for the beloved

Jacob Partlow

A Lover’s Note

Her eyes are as blue as the deep sea
As green as the fauna
As warm as a hot cup of tea
And as eager as the approaching dawn

Her smile is as white as snow
As brilliant as the stars above
As subtle as the ground below
And as pure as a dove

Her hair is as dark as the moonless sky
As fluent as waterfall
As short as a second gone by
And as delicate as a china doll

Her skin is as pale as the moon
Her lips are as red as wine
Her posture straight as a clock’s hand at noon
And her heart beats as if it were mine

Mandeep Chahal

It begins with
her hands,
ivory fixtures carved by Michelangelo himself
suspended by distant oceanic veins, like roadways home.
the lines on her knuckles, permanent and weary from the repetition of movement
her fingers themselves, like souls that trace her stubborn hair as she
summons her very own existence

It begins with her hands but it is really
her skin,
the porcelain chamber that catches filtered light
soft, and untouched
delicate, but sure, a sari wrapping and holding her together


her neck, a pedestal
holding this face, enveloped and surround by
the cascade that is her hair
catching the light
and reflecting the gold of the sun

high, up on her cheekbones, are constellations of freckles,
a mythology yet to be discovered
if only Orion and Dorado had been there to see the making of
this face

her eyes, like nothing else in this world
the shore of a place far from here
that carries heavy sapphire stones
across the banks of the whites and
into her soul

this face, enveloped and surround by
the cascade that is her hair
catching the light
and reflecting the gold of the sun

I would often like to rest beneath her eyes
and trace her petal lips
before they fall and met my hands,
her hands.
it begins with her hands
but I find myself assured it's her all.


Stephanie Martin

His toes are hairy, like an animal’s.
His feet are large, much like a clown’s.
His legs resemble a supermodel’s: long, too thin
(Except his have hair).
His hips are angular – they jut out like the coffee table that surprises you in the dark.
His stomach is a flat, hard expanse, like cardboard or glass.
So is his chest.
His shoulders house arms as long as tree branches.
His head sits on his neck, just like everyone else’s.
His lips, his cheeks share the color of the rest of him
coffee overwrought with too much cream.
His nose protrudes, like a fairytale witch’s.
His eyes, his hair, the color of dirty rainwater.
However, all things combined make for something much like the saying “greater than the
sum of its parts”. And the parts, and the sum, I am lucky to call mine.

Sadhna Samantarai


He caught me with his gently pressing tongue of steel dipped in poison

His tongue of saintly curses and sweetly tainted lies

He caught me with the cipher of his mind, of sensible rationality,

A mind that finds and defines beyond all confinement

He caught me with his warm freshly-scented blanketing arms of comfort

He caught me with his flexing stonewall arms of passion

He caught me in his soft, worn from labor and soap hands,

His smooth as the spotted pebble at the bottom of the creek hands,

His callused bear paw hands

He caught me with his spices and honey voice,

His bass to my treble voice,

His voice of war drums and charming peace offerings

He caught me with his sea-deep eyes,

His green with the forever-ness of an endless field of evergreens eyes,

His puppy dog trusting eyes

He caught me in the bars of his caging lashes

He caught me with the passing breeze from his showcase racehorse legs

He caught me on the tall shoulders of a sycamore tree,

On the broad shoulders of a battered castle,

On the bursting shoulders of giants forced into dollhouses

He caught me in the flowing rivers that spiderweb his wrists,

In the scar that runs its vertical track three inches down his left eyebrow

He caught me in the sprinkles of freckles that liven his boyish face with joy

He caught me in the blades of grass that form each brow into a solemn manly arch

He caught me in the rise and fall of the tides of his back

He caught me in the comforting curve of his neck of grandmother’s hips

He caught me with a chest of a wide mother tree trunk, withered yet fierce after hundreds of years

He caught me in the intricate labyrinth of his untidy raven hair

He caught me snared in the rose’s thorns scattered on his cheeks and chin

He caught me in the dark chocolate warmth of his sculpted body

He caught me in the devilish smirk dancing on his angel’s lips

He caught me in his angel’s lips

He caught me in his lips

He caught me


Kelley Paugh


My beloved reptile, Blues Traveler

Your fingers borrowed a frayed section of spider web as their base

And grafted on gnarled chicken claws for finger tips

The space between your eyes is a child’s slide off your nose

The same eyes that are olives removed of their pimentos

And are split into two hemispheres by the slit of a cat’s eye

You have nostrils that are the holes poked into a microwaved potato

And are also caves nestled in the peak of Half Dome Mountain

Your skin is of a baby with jaundice

Haphazardly spattered by black ink

Your age is a redwood tree 1,000 years in diameter

With many years left to grow

Your elbows are ball bearings textured with rust

Attached to the weathered handles of boat oars

The bumps on your flesh are bubble wrap

But also sprinkles on an ice cream cone

With scales that are ridges in clay

Your stomach is the soft, white belly of a harp seal

With your innards visible through x-ray

Your tail is a malformed sausage

Or even a finger with a tumor in the middle

Either way, your tail is a plump fruit advertising ripeness

Bridged to the body by a fallen log

Your movement is a snake swimming upriver
A worm perpetually wriggling into a tight hole

Your mouth is the mouth of a pink oyster shell

Hiding a tongue of stretched salt water taffy

Your ears are shallow roadway tunnels through a skull

Emptier than my feelings could ever be for you

Your head is a lumpy heart-shaped rock found on the beach

That some may argue whether it is actually heart-shaped or not once found

You are a leopard of the desert

Faster than the sunrise that colors your exterior.